24 thoughts on “A best IELTS model plan for Academic Task 1

  1. Dear Madam,

    I am taking my test this Saturday, and was hopping if you would mark my essay (question are the Academic IELTS task 1 originated by you)

    I used some point from your sample answer ( i think for the conclusion), hope you wouldn’t mind.

    My answer :
    The graph compares the number of immigrants from West Indies, India and Pakistan to the UK between 1940 and 1970.

    In general, immigrants of Indians and Pakistanis increased over the period. On the other hand, although immigrantion of West Indians increased at first, it later declined.

    From the graph, we can see that the number of West Indies immigrants was at its lowest level between 1940 and 1946.After that, the number of immigrants than increased dramatically to roughly 18,000 people in 1956. Although there was a brief dipped over the next two years, the rate than rose steeply and reached a peaked of 35,000 people in 1960. Since than, the figures declined steeply and shown a downward trend between 1964 – 1970.

    In contrast, India and Pakistani immigrants rose consistently to approximately 8,000 people from 1940 to 1958. After a slight decreased by 1958, the figure than rose steeply to below 28,000 people in 1962. It than falls slightly and fluctuates over the next eight years.

    Overall, from the figures immigrants from West Indies is expected to rise, whereas West Indian immigration continue to decrease.

    Question Source : http://www.bestieltsonline.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/Task-1-Line-Graphs.pdf

    Regards,
    Daniel

  2. Hi Daniel,

    I’m so sorry, I seem to have received your post much too late. By my calculations, you will probably be receiving your results right now. I hope it all went well for you. If not, do not hesitate to contact me directly via the contact page to talk about my marking service.

    Alanna

  3. hello mam,

    i am a indian student and i heard alot about your experience in ielts.I want to enhance my writing and reading skills as well.I scored daily 6.5 in both ,its request to you to please advice me some interpret skills in this two sectors.i also want to impart once speaking interview to you,
    thanks

  4. Hi,

    Contact me directly via the contact page and we’ll try to organise something.

    Alanna

  5. Hi Tanzeel,

    Contact me directly via the contact page so we can try to organise something.

    Alanna

  6. Hi,

    Contact me directly via the contact page and we’ll try to organise something.

    Alanna

  7. hi mam i m form india will u plz help me how i get a more band in all test of ielts i dont know how i contact you i will give u my no 8146914828 plz help

  8. Hi Nauman,

    Contact me directly via the contact page to discuss me marking and giving feedback on your writing and speaking.

    Kind Regards,
    Alanna

  9. Hi Alanna,

    Mam please guide me for ielts preparation especially listening and speaking.

    kind Regards,
    Rahman

  10. Hi alanna,
    I want to take guide for only writing, please. I have taken twice ielts even though my writing score never go above 5
    Please help me, i am going to take ielts first of september

  11. Hi madam
    i am going to sit for ielts exam on 22nd of september. I am very worried about the exam. Can you suggest me some tips so that i can do well in the exam. I will be waiting for your reply.

  12. Hi Alanna madam!
    i’ve find out your videos on youtube this is really good stuff of ielts would you please help me in academic reading.

  13. How bout flowcharts or describing progress? Your model is only bout graphs. I want to know about describing flowcharts and describing progress.

  14. The process is similar for flowcharts and describing a process. You need to adapt it accordingly.

    Kind Regards,
    Alanna

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